Hanging on!

As I gripped the rock, 

This is you!  You were on a seemingly impossible mission.  Describe in detail how you made your way up the rock face.

Ideas

Was anyone behind you or ahead of you? 

Describe the weather.

Explain how you felt.

Describe in careful detail what you could see.

What did you spot that could help you?

Where were you trying to get to?

Describe the sounds around you.

Explain what you could smell.

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