Dear Year 5
I am gutted! I'm so disappointed that I wasn't able to join you on our trip to The Deep.
Please cheer me up! I'd love to be able to read about your adventure and feel like I saw it, heard it and touched it from right here at home.
You could tell me some or all of these things:
- how you felt when you arrived
- what you saw
- what you were allowed to touch and what it felt like
- what you learnt in the coral workshop
- a funny moment
- a fascinating fact you picked up
- something you think could be improved if we take another class there
- what you bought in the shop
- the most amazing creature and why you thought so
- the creature you'd least like to meet if you were scuba diving (and why?)
- whether anyone was sick on the bus!
Use a minimum of 100 words so I can really get a fabulous picture of your day. Don't forget to use Word so you can right-click words like 'big' to up-level them. Post your comment on this blog after you've double checked for full stops.
If you can use When If After While AND ask me a question, you will earn a ClassDojo which I can add right from my phone. Remember each one is a minute of Wii time!
I look forward to reading your recounts.
Yours disappointedly
Mrs Cole :-(
PS the picture is the closest I can get to ocean life so make your descriptions sizzle!
