Here's a sneak preview of part of your journey. Use your amazing talent as writers to develop a 100 word story about this picture.
Your challenge is to include with your delightful descriptions:
- A book
- A box
- A key
Saturday 21 May 2011
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Here's a sneak preview of part of your journey. Use your amazing talent as writers to develop a 100 word story about this picture.
Your challenge is to include with your delightful descriptions:
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there it was a mystery house, where the unknown creature lives. the mysterious creature had a book but this was no ordinary book it had special powers inside and can not be opened by the wrong person over wize loads of spirits and bad creatures could leark out... and will hornt you forever and ever! and this book is in safe keeping of a box but this box needed a key to open...but were was the key? The monster had it dangling from his big slimy neck on a piece of chain! How could we get the key and book? there it was a mystery house, where the unknown creature lives. the myterious creature had a book but this was no ordenary book it had speacial powers inside and can not be opened by the wrong person overwize loads of spirits and bad creatures could leark out... and will hornt you forever and ever!and this book is in safe keeping of a box but this box needed a key to open...but were was the key?
ReplyDeleteI love the use of a question in here Amy & Emma. You added good description about the monster. Remember in the next one to check for capital letters before publishing ;-)
ReplyDeleteI'm looking forward to hearing some delightful descriptions that include the photo. Have fun playing with words!
ReplyDeleteAs I walked towards the colourful house my heart started to pound. Even though I was in the middle of no where, and nobody with me, I was determined to go into the mysterious house. What has the box led me to? Before I entered the mysterious house, I checked if I had the key, just in case I needed to open the door. Sometimes voices echoed saying,
ReplyDelete“Kaif do not open the door. You will become violent. DO NOT OPEN THE DOOR!!!!!!!!!!!
I felt even more scared after the echoes. As I became even more tensed I sang to myself the song
Every thing's going to be all right.
when i suddenly saw the glitaring house i wounderd what is was as i walked closer to the house wounded even more what i was getting in to then i was there and i tried to open the door put i needed a key alked othen when i turend around i thorgot everything then i walked off then that was the end for that house.
ReplyDeleteI think that kaif is adding lots of describeing words like colourful house.Then i think amy is using really good words for example where the unknown creatures lived.
ReplyDeleteI wish that i could hear more and more things about the mysterious house please please!
On day me and my frends said go along through the mountain but we stopped we saw a hunted house I walked to it I pulled the mat suddenly I saw a silver key I piked it up and put it in the key hole it opened. While I was in the house my friends deride to get the box I went to the box as I got the box it made creek my friends shouted to me bring it I ran out the house we ran to our tent we open it we saw a magic book and suddenly it glowed
ReplyDeletewe were shocked we open the book it tolled all the power at the end we all had powers .
When I walked across the crooked pathway in the middle of the pathway was a black box.
ReplyDeleteThe box was a beautiful black midnight colour but as well as it being beautiful it was mighty scruffy. It was covered with dints and scratches along with stains and bumps.
I thought of taking it home but then I decided to leave it here were it belongs.
When I unlocked the black box I uncovered a dark secret...
Inside the black box was a sky high blue coloured book.
Despite the fact the book being beautiful I wanted to open it but but I new instantly that the book was dangerous.
So I trotted of and decided that this never happened.
But when I got home I couldn't help telling my mum.
It's lucky she didn't believe me.
Whilst I was in my room I got out my rusty imensse box ansd opened it up and inside it was the black box I was in shock
Even though I thought my life was over I was wrong, there was a house about 1mile away so I ran to this house but little did I know,it was where the Myst people were living. So I tried to run but I was trapped I was in a cage, this is not how I planed my camp holiday. Then this big ugly beast came running towards me it was just my Dad. Then he got his lighter he burnt the cage bars and then we where free well I was DAD COME ON LETS GET OUT OF HERE KNAW!!!
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ReplyDeleteThe background looks lovely with the waterfall falling down behind the diminutive house and surrounding it. The stained glass makes the house look like old scary people live there. The path-way looks like when you stand on its going to rise to the sky and take you somewhere you have never been before. But Where is that secret place? The immense boulders are gradually tipping on-to the diminutive house and will eventually fall onto it and break the house. The water isn't ordinary water its got poison in and if you put the tip of your toe in it suddenly poison you. When you open the door the house rises and also takes you somewhere you have never ever been before... Where is that place too?
It can’t be! I have been searching for the lost temple by the Collini Lake for years, but finally I have found it! I am the first person to find it. While I was standing on the lit up bridge in confusion I suddenly heard a dark deep voice echoing from the woods
ReplyDeleteThere a light blue and green river it has a lovely water fall it has blue green windows with beatifull patterns the ground is old and grey it has black roof it has a bridge the door is old and very brown the path has little squares between the rooks in the background is grey like an old women hair behind the house there's a lovely gold shiny lights. When you walk it will be very scary it feels that its gonnon brake while you go in the house you will see that the lights are all on when you go near the door the rug is bright yellow.
ReplyDeleteAmy and Emma has used lots of great describeing word land you made me want to know what happens next.But can you please put capitl letters at the begin of the sentence and put better opener like Although,despite and Even though
ReplyDeletewhen you walk on the path it's a bit bumply and the warter is shiny the water fall crashing the hause is glos like a drangon flys the door is like there's gonck on the botom of the door
ReplyDeleteThe hose is a beautiful sight when you get closer you can see a beautiful water fall not only that but if you fole im to the water it will cill you.
ReplyDeleteWhile we was on a walk to find a secret location we came across a different location it was something I had never seen before. But all that went through my head is was in that mysterious house?just what could it be ? I mean could it be a family of ordinary persons
ReplyDeleteA log wile lawn it would tack me Avis to get acros it.But want I did not no is that in the distress they was a title hut was just staning on end off the stun brig the hut is all difrunt cullnt like red green and all so black but want I did not no the brig has got loss off layts and rock but the rock are
ReplyDeleteand they is water in the wet cave want the hut is in but the cave has got stun poutey stagtay on the
roth I did not if they was going to foll on me so I tray to dave past them it looks like they is acham
when I got there was a spell on it I had an I der I dayvd in the water and went to the back off the biding but they was uder water crechs like sneys and crabs and all so fish I was rung out off
breff I cwicle swamm up to the back off the biling and claming in the widow.
In the house witch is haunted a person is daunted by a small black box. In the mountains it sleeps and as the man who owns the house is a farmer he needs to look after his sheep. It is quit pathetic. In the house witch is pathetic a wolf witch is majestic. While he was trying to get rid of the box
ReplyDeletewell done chloe.w good start your really getting the hang off the hundred word challange and are using really good vocabulary well done :)#
ReplyDeleteWell done emma really good start it makes me want to now more but when i do don t forget to edit for puctuation
ReplyDeletebut any way like i said really good start :)#
well done bethany good start i really want to know what happens next because it made me laugh and it was really good :)#
ReplyDeleteoh and what does knaw mean???
did you mean now?
really good start any way!
will there be a next?
I absolutely love it, it is like I am in a fairyland and I wish I was there myself!
ReplyDeleteIt is amazing.
Ruby, Katie and Adam - Thistly Meadow Yr 5