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You could start with... Even though it was warm water, I was not happy with where I had been thrown. There floating right next to me was an immense jellyfish.
As I escaped from what I like to call the tank of doom I felt so relived. The terrifying jellyfish had five legs and no eyes, no bones and no brain so how does it move it gives me the creeps! If miss Vole would have survived the jellyfish (which tank! Despite me being scared of a no brained jellyfish I still survived YEAH. Even though the water was freezing cold it helped me get to the side and aply the zit cream. When I was in the tank with the horryfying jellyfish I certenly didn’t wast time trying to dodge and dive the evil thing I got out as soon as I could.
When I got thrown into the tank, I touched a jellyfish and it was all slimy and horrible! While you’re in there, it’s so wet and stinks of smelly jellyfish “EUGHHH!” Despite me feeling brave, it was still a bit risky. If you tried to smash the glass with your whole body, you couldn’t because it’s painful. After you get out, you would feel better because of the sea water stinging in your eyes. Whenever the jellyfish moves smoothly, it always thinks that you are going to attack its habitat. Even though you are soaked, it feels like an adventure.
Even though it was warm water, I was not happy with where I had been thrown. There floating right next to me was an immense jellyfish. It had a leg missing and a terrible eye it was all wonky. When I was trying to get out the vast jelly fish was in a glisining rock with teeny tiny golden fish’s. Wow I said I could not believe my eyes but it was a pretty good size for them and the jelly fish. I got out with my zit cream at last and Nadia fall got stung by the jelly fish. I was happy when I got out because that horrible Nadia vole put me in that horrible condition that I did not like now.
When I got thrown in the tank with the jellyfish I touched it and it felt horrible and slimy. While I was stuck in the wet blue tank the jellyfish was moving all over. If you touched it, it will sting you quickly with its long tentacles. So I threw some jellyfish food across the other side of the tank so it would get away from me. Next it gave me time to get my knife out and kill it when it’s not looking. When it touched me it died because I had some special knives that I stabbed it with.by sammy
If it happed again I would have more exsperons. When I go to that place again I will take more acwitm If it happen again I would have more exsperons. When I go to that place again I will take more acwitmant but I don’t think I will have to go there. I think I will have to stop them again but probably not there most likely somewhere else. When I saw the jellyfish it was all slime and its long legs. It was horrible. It is still very scary even when you are a spy. When I was using the zip cream I think Mrs Vole got a bit scared of the jellyfish coming at her. I am glad she was scared of the jellyfish. Whenever I look at it I get so scared. Although I tried to break the top off I used my zit cream instead. Despite it being so slimy I was scared getting killed that is why I used my zit cream.
THE JELLYFISH SCENE.Despite the fact the jellyfish was coming towards me I still had a plan. When the jellyfish was in the tank it looked ugly (its legs).While the jellyfish was out of the tank it could still breathe. When I got thrown in the tank I thought the jellyfish was going to sting me. After I got out of the tank the jellyfish was still was alive and able to hurt me. Finally I remembered the zit cream was in my pocket. If the jellyfish was strong it would have big muscles. Never before have I been scared in my entire life. At Appropriately 12.00 I killed the jellyfish with my special poisonous earring. The jellyfish looked big and old.laureng danielle
This was the most bloodcurdling moment of my life. I was trapped in some sort of water tank with the foulest looking jellyfish that I’ve ever seen. The water was all cloudy; well I hope it was water. I was put in there by the evil women Miss Vole. When they found out I was spying, they wanted to kill me! I thought it would suck my brain out or something. While she was laughing I put some of my zit cream on the cage, and in a few seconds it went boom!! (Phew!)
Even though it was warm water, I was not happy with where I had been thrown. There floating right next to me was an immense jellyfish. The jelly fish’s legs were like pieces of thick rope. Its body was like a big piece of slime. Despite the water getting colder as I was splashing, I still tried to hold the metal bit at the top. I was so scared. I started wondering what the jellyfish did if it stung you I knew it would hurt badly. Whenever the jelly fish came towards me I tried to splash the jellyfish away. I remember I had the zitcream. And I knew it could burn through metal. When I put it on the metal it worked and all the water came flooding out of the tank and landed on Miss Vole. Although the jellyfish stung Miss Vole she got stung hahaha. I am glad because she tried to kill me but it didn’t work!
When the jellyfish wiggled its tentacles looked like a hairy spider. Its electric sparks were an electric blue powered thunder bolt. It was like a squishy brain and felt like an overwhelming alien. While I was in the cosy hot water the jellyfish was coming closer and closer to me I kept trying to swim away and think of a plan. It was the scariest thing I have ever experienced. So I tried to hit the top of the cage but it would not come off. So I got the zit cream and put it on the metal. For a minute I thought it wasn’t working but the cage burst and I got out.
Jellyfish Attack!!!!! When Alex Rider was on a mission to Cornwall a man named Darius Sayle was making computers for schools that had viruses on. Darius had a beautiful home and his friend Nadia Vole chucked him into a massive tank with a killer jellyfish because they all found out that he was a spy (Ian Riders nephew which was a spy which they hated). After Nadia had got a camera to take pictures of him to send to Darius, Alex found his zit cream (which burns through metal) whizzed the cap off and spread it around. After Nadia started to laugh (because she didn’t think it was actually going to work), out popped the jellyfish. It landed right on top of Nadia and the camera kept taking pictures of Alex. He ran and grabbed a gun and his backpack before Nadia could get the jellyfish off herself. Although Darius had a beautiful home before the water had gone all over it, it now looks like a bombsite. Despite the jellyfish nearly dying on Nadia, there was a crab stuck in her hand.
As he got in the spy place in Cornwell he saw a jellyfish, it had a big blob of jelly on top and as he turned around he saw a ugly person called Nadia and she was the strictest person here and when he wasn’t looking she grabbed Alex’s hands and throw him in the tank like he was garbage as he was struggling Nadia was taking pictures of Alex to send to Mr Blunt. 2 minutes later, in his pocket he saw some zit cream which burns throw six meters down throw metal, plastic and loads more and when the metal rubbed it on to the metal it sank down. 3 seconds later… SMASH! The glass had broken and the jellyfish zapped Nadia and if you were in that tank you would freeze to death… When Alex got out safely Nadia Vole was still zapping herself on the floor in a giant puddle which went all around the room. Although he killed one bad spy he still has got a lot more to go. When Alex got dried he saw Darius Sayle down in the lab area (which was districted) he was making this computer virus thing and when you looked at it they actually did quite well making it, if it was something to do with good things not bad things. So until next time goodbye!!!
Stormbreaker Jellyfish extract: I couldn’t breathe, because my lungs were filled with water. The enormous jellyfish loomed above. Even though I was so scared, I knew I had to escape. I struggled to get above the water. Nadia was laughing at me and taking pictures with a camera. “The walls are too thick to try and break!” Suddenly, I had an idea. Despite knowing my plan would work, I was still nervous. I got out my Zit Cream. I carefully applied it to the edge of one of the tank walls. The walls burst open, sending a rush of water straight at Nadia!
Even though it was warm water, I was not happy with where I had been thrown. There floating right next to me was an immense jellyfish. Despite the fact the jellyfish was all slimy it still was swimming. Nadia was laughing at me and taking pictures of me. “What are you doing stop that now” “I am putting some zit cream on “ “In two minutes the zit cream will cut through the wall and explode” The walls burst open and the jellyfish escaped! “Arghhhh!!! Get this thing off me! You’ll pay for this, stupid boy!”
When the slimy jellyfish jumped out on Nadia I heard an electric shock it was funny. If the jellyfish got me I would scream my head of After I was chucked in the water my lungs stuck together it felt horrible. While I was swimming I remember that I had my super zit cream it is really good.
You could start with... Even though it was warm water, I was not happy with where I had been thrown. There floating right next to me was an immense jellyfish. When Alex saw the jellyfish, he started to panic. If the jellyfish would have eaten Alex, it would have made it sick. Then Alex got the zit cream then put it on the aluminium and then all of the water came pouring out of the tank. While the woman was trying to get out of the sofa, he got his bag and then tried to escape. After Alex had escaped, it was very hard for Alex to climb up all the stairs to get to the helicopter.
Dirty, dirty tank When I was stuck in the tank I kept on smashing into the sides. (That is until I noticed that on the sides there was jellyfish leavings firmed onto it!) It appeared that no one had cleared out the sides in ages! Even if I didn’t drown from the water or get killed by the jelly fish I would die in disgust. So I did some quick thinking and burnt the cage broke free and watched the jellyfish eat the evil woman and now she’s dead hooray! Despite the fact the jellyfish had helped me I grabbed the harpoon and shot it! (I wish)
when i was stuck in that smelly tank i was freezing but shocked at the same time if you know what i mean it was murky blue with a bit of blood in it it made me feel sick .the jelly fish kept coming closer and closer till eventualy it shattered because i kicked the side of the tank the tank was made out of very thin glass .
As I escaped from what I like to call the tank of doom I felt so relived. The terrifying jellyfish had five legs and no eyes, no bones and no brain so how does it move it gives me the creeps! If miss Vole would have survived the jellyfish (which tank! Despite me being scared of a no brained jellyfish I still survived YEAH. Even though the water was freezing cold it helped me get to the side and aply the zit cream. When I was in the tank with the horryfying jellyfish I certenly didn’t wast time trying to dodge and dive the evil thing I got out as soon as I could.
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ReplyDeleteWhen I got thrown into the tank, I touched a jellyfish and it was all slimy and horrible!
While you’re in there, it’s so wet and stinks of smelly jellyfish “EUGHHH!”
Despite me feeling brave, it was still a bit risky.
If you tried to smash the glass with your whole body, you couldn’t because it’s painful.
After you get out, you would feel better because of the sea water stinging in your eyes.
Whenever the jellyfish moves smoothly, it always thinks that you are going to attack its habitat.
Even though you are soaked, it feels like an adventure.
Even though it was warm water, I was not happy with where I had been thrown. There floating right next to me was an immense jellyfish. It had a leg missing and a terrible eye it was all wonky. When I was trying to get out the vast jelly fish was in a glisining rock with teeny tiny golden fish’s. Wow I said I could not believe my eyes but it was a pretty good size for them and the jelly fish. I got out with my zit cream at last and Nadia fall got stung by the jelly fish. I was happy when I got out because that horrible Nadia vole put me in that horrible condition that I did not like now.
ReplyDeleteWhen I got thrown in the tank with the jellyfish I touched it and it felt horrible and slimy. While I was stuck in the wet blue tank the jellyfish was moving all over. If you touched it, it will sting you quickly with its long tentacles. So I threw some jellyfish food across the other side of the tank so it would get away from me. Next it gave me time to get my knife out and kill it when it’s not looking. When it touched me it died because I had some special knives that I stabbed it with.by sammy
ReplyDeleteIf it happed again I would have more exsperons. When I go to that place again I will take more acwitm If it happen again I would have more exsperons. When I go to that place again I will take more acwitmant but I don’t think I will have to go there. I think I will have to stop them again but probably not there most likely somewhere else. When I saw the jellyfish it was all slime and its long legs. It was horrible. It is still very scary even when you are a spy. When I was using the zip cream I think Mrs Vole got a bit scared of the jellyfish coming at her. I am glad she was scared of the jellyfish. Whenever I look at it I get so scared. Although I tried to break the top off I used my zit cream instead. Despite it being so slimy I was scared getting killed that is why I used my zit cream.
ReplyDeleteTHE JELLYFISH SCENE.Despite the fact the jellyfish was coming towards me I still had a plan. When the jellyfish was in the tank it looked ugly (its legs).While the jellyfish was out of the tank it could still breathe. When I got thrown in the tank I thought the jellyfish was going to sting me. After I got out of the tank the jellyfish was still was alive and able to hurt me. Finally I remembered the zit cream was in my pocket. If the jellyfish was strong it would have big muscles. Never before have I been scared in my entire life. At Appropriately 12.00 I killed the jellyfish with my special poisonous earring. The jellyfish looked big and old.laureng danielle
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ReplyDeleteThis was the most bloodcurdling moment of my life. I was trapped in some sort of water tank with the foulest looking jellyfish that I’ve ever seen. The water was all cloudy; well I hope it was water. I was put in there by the evil women Miss Vole. When they found out I was spying, they wanted to kill me! I thought it would suck my brain out or something. While she was laughing I put some of my zit cream on the cage, and in a few seconds it went boom!! (Phew!)
Even though it was warm water, I was not happy with where I had been thrown. There floating right next to me was an immense jellyfish. The jelly fish’s legs were like pieces of thick rope. Its body was like a big piece of slime. Despite the water getting colder as I was splashing, I still tried to hold the metal bit at the top. I was so scared. I started wondering what the jellyfish did if it stung you I knew it would hurt badly. Whenever the jelly fish came towards me I tried to splash the jellyfish away. I remember I had the zitcream. And I knew it could burn through metal. When I put it on the metal it worked and all the water came flooding out of the tank and landed on Miss Vole. Although the jellyfish stung Miss Vole she got stung hahaha. I am glad because she tried to kill me but it didn’t work!
ReplyDeleteWhen the jellyfish wiggled its tentacles looked like a hairy spider. Its electric sparks were an electric blue powered thunder bolt. It was like a squishy brain and felt like an overwhelming alien. While I was in the cosy hot water the jellyfish was coming closer and closer to me I kept trying to swim away and think of a plan. It was the scariest thing I have ever experienced. So I tried to hit the top of the cage but it would not come off. So I got the zit cream and put it on the metal. For a minute I thought it wasn’t working but the cage burst and I got out.
ReplyDeleteJellyfish Attack!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWhen Alex Rider was on a mission to Cornwall a man named Darius Sayle was making computers for schools that had viruses on. Darius had a beautiful home and his friend Nadia Vole chucked him into a massive tank with a killer jellyfish because they all found out that he was a spy (Ian Riders nephew which was a spy which they hated). After Nadia had got a camera to take pictures of him to send to Darius, Alex found his zit cream (which burns through metal) whizzed the cap off and spread it around. After Nadia started to laugh (because she didn’t think it was actually going to work), out popped the jellyfish. It landed right on top of Nadia and the camera kept taking pictures of Alex. He ran and grabbed a gun and his backpack before Nadia could get the jellyfish off herself. Although Darius had a beautiful home before the water had gone all over it, it now looks like a bombsite. Despite the jellyfish nearly dying on Nadia, there was a crab stuck in her hand.
BEWARE OF THE JELLYFISH…
ReplyDeleteAs he got in the spy place in Cornwell he saw a jellyfish, it had a big blob of jelly on top and as he turned around he saw a ugly person called Nadia and she was the strictest person here and when he wasn’t looking she grabbed Alex’s hands and throw him in the tank like he was garbage as he was struggling Nadia was taking pictures of Alex to send to Mr Blunt.
2 minutes later, in his pocket he saw some zit cream which burns throw six meters down throw metal, plastic and loads more and when the metal rubbed it on to the metal it sank down.
3 seconds later… SMASH! The glass had broken and the jellyfish zapped Nadia and if you were in that tank you would freeze to death…
When Alex got out safely Nadia Vole was still zapping herself on the floor in a giant puddle which went all around the room.
Although he killed one bad spy he still has got a lot more to go.
When Alex got dried he saw Darius Sayle down in the lab area (which was districted) he was making this computer virus thing and when you looked at it they actually did quite well making it, if it was something to do with good things not bad things.
So until next time goodbye!!!
Stormbreaker Jellyfish extract:
ReplyDeleteI couldn’t breathe, because my lungs were filled with water. The enormous jellyfish loomed above. Even though I was so scared, I knew I had to escape. I struggled to get above the water. Nadia was laughing at me and taking pictures with a camera.
“The walls are too thick to try and break!” Suddenly, I had an idea. Despite knowing my plan would work, I was still nervous. I got out my Zit Cream. I carefully applied it to the edge of one of the tank walls. The walls burst open, sending a rush of water straight at Nadia!
BEWARE OF THE JELLYFISH
ReplyDeleteEven though it was warm water, I was not happy with where I had been thrown. There floating right next to me was an immense jellyfish. Despite the fact the jellyfish was all slimy it still was swimming. Nadia was laughing at me and taking pictures of me.
“What are you doing stop that now”
“I am putting some zit cream on “
“In two minutes the zit cream will cut through the wall and explode”
The walls burst open and the jellyfish escaped!
“Arghhhh!!! Get this thing off me! You’ll pay for this, stupid boy!”
When the slimy jellyfish jumped out on Nadia I heard an electric shock it was funny.
If the jellyfish got me I would scream my head of
After I was chucked in the water my lungs stuck together it felt horrible.
While I was swimming I remember that I had my super zit cream it is really good.
You could start with... Even though it was warm water, I was not happy with where I had been thrown. There floating right next to me was an immense jellyfish. When Alex saw the jellyfish, he started to panic. If the jellyfish would have eaten Alex, it would have made it sick. Then Alex got the zit
ReplyDeletecream then put it on the aluminium and then all of the water came pouring out of the tank. While the woman was trying to get out of the sofa, he got his bag and then tried to escape. After Alex had escaped, it was very hard for Alex to climb up all the stairs to get to the helicopter.
Dirty, dirty tank When I was stuck in the tank I kept on smashing into the sides. (That is until I noticed that on the sides there was jellyfish leavings firmed onto it!) It appeared that no one had cleared out the sides in ages! Even if I didn’t drown from the water or get killed by the jelly fish I would die in disgust. So I did some quick thinking and burnt the cage broke free and watched the jellyfish eat the evil woman and now she’s dead hooray! Despite the fact the jellyfish had helped me I grabbed the harpoon and shot it! (I wish)
ReplyDeletewhen i was stuck in that smelly tank i was freezing but shocked at the same time if you know what i mean it was murky blue with a bit of blood in it it made me feel sick .the jelly fish kept coming closer and closer till eventualy it shattered because i kicked the side of the tank the tank was made out of very thin glass .
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