Mrs Cole's tip: Type it in Word first in case you don't get chance to finish - you can count the words there and spell check too!
Your extra challenge is to try to add these words into your 100 words:
When
If
After
While
My head was spinning
Here is how your story begins...
It was last Saturday when I was taking my dog out for a walk on the moors. As I came over the top of the hill, this strange sight towered in front of me.
I was walkng on the moors with my dog when I saw a five foot chair come out of nowwhere slowly I creeped towards it i felt petrified!
ReplyDeletei was so worried i couldent move. then something terrifying thing happened the Earth started to shake.
It was last Saturday when I was taking my dog out for a walk on the moors. As I came over the top of the hill, this strange sight towered in front of me.
ReplyDeleteI was amazed at how BIG it was! If you sat on top of it you will be able to see sheep in the faraway distance. How amazing is that?It was about twenty feet hight.That's high! my dog was so scared poor thing . It made a good home for bugs and also a nice sleeping place for large animals. I stood under it also made a good shelter WOW!!!!I tell every body about that wonderful day. did you enjoy our story? Please tell us if you did!thankyou.Lauren&Alisha.
I was walkng on the moors with my dog when I saw a five foot chair come out of nowwhere slowly I creeped towards I`t I felt petrified!
ReplyDeletei was so worried i couldent move. then something terrifying thing happened the Earth started to shake. The 50 feet tall gaint picked me and my dog up off of the moors .
It was last Saturday when I was taking my dog out for a walk on the moors. As I came over the top of the hill, this strange sight towered in front of me. While I was running after my dog, a alien vampire came over a tall seat. We started running it was scary my head was sping around and around. I screamed. When I was scared I started crying. Fifty people have been turned into vampires. ”If I see you I will tell you about it”. After I ran around I got dizzy. We had fun we got some vinegar from our bag of food. We have defeated them
ReplyDeleteIt was last Saturday when I was taking my dog out for a walk on the moors. As I came over the top of the hill, this strange sight towered in front of me. It looks like a giant’s chair that has been thrown out because it wasn’t big enough. Then I heard a huge roar that made the earth rock. It made my head spin and I nearly fainted and I saw a fifty foot giant striding towards me. When I started running away I saw the giant picking up the chair and was running back to his castle.
ReplyDeleteIt was a gargantuan chair. I pinched myself because I thought i was dreaming. When i had pinched myself i still saw the chair, the chair was the sort of chair a giant would use. The chair was about 96 metres and were about two meters maximum. Was I dreaming or was the chair really in front of me.If it wasn’t real I must have been having hallucinations or something.I went up to it and touched it to see if it real ,and it was real.It was made of solid wood that was painted black as the dark sky
ReplyDeleteNight.
We were just walking on the moors and a massive five footed chair appeared right in front of us. We were frightened to death it was really scary.
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It was last Saturday when I was taking my dog out for a walk on the moors. As I came over the top of the hill, this strange sight towered in front of me. A giant brown chair came up infront of me from nowwhere, i was so shocked i couldnt belive my eyes! Also my dog wouldnt stop barking the barking sound was so loud i had to cover my ears!...Then a loud bang
ReplyDeleteThere's some great descriptions in here. Great suspense! It would make a good book!
ReplyDeleteIt was last Saturday when I was taking my dog out for a walk on the moors. As I came over the top of the hill, this strange sight towered in front of me.
ReplyDeleteIt suspiciously was a gargantuan chair turned horizontally.
When I investigated it with my dog, he sniffed something out.
It was a mysterious gem…
When I had a look at this mysterious gem, it was actually a cursed artefact.
After a while it suddenly started to rumble. If I touched it then I don’t know what would happen. I reached out my hand onto the chair. It mysteriously disappeared.
I was taking my dog for a walk when I saw this humongos chair it was like a giant from my point of view. As it towerd before me. As i wonder if I would ever going to walk up there when I was older that is if we don't move. I still would like to explore it. I ran as fast as i couldafter chasing fluffy my dog.So I carried on walking to get a better view. Then I ran again and my head was spinning,so for a while I had a rest and woke.....
ReplyDeleteThere was a chiar infront of me,my dog ran back to my house,I knew he was safe.But before I climbed this chair ,I had to put on my pocket climbing gloves. If I succsesfully climbed the chair, I would be able to see for miles.When I was climbing it would get esear and esear. l did get to the top in the end then I shouted "I'm the king of the chair and thats all thats fair!"
ReplyDelete"WWER WHO...AHH its turning into somthing! A TRANWS-FORMER!!!" But what was it going to be...
WOW! That's a big chair someday i will be able to climb it.All I could see was things stiking out of it.If there is anything I could climb up, I will be able to get on itwhen all of a sudden something exciting happend,the dog was barking but it was on top of the chair.Then all the florr was vibratingand the dog jumped in to my hands.I turned round and there was a enormas giant.
ReplyDeletewhen i reched the top of the hill,there stud infront of me a chair.A giant tremedose wooden chair!I coudn't blieve it but why is there a chair in the contry side.Then i thorght to my self i am going to climb that chair know matter what.So i quickly wrapped jack my dog around one of the chair legs that looked like a tree trunk then i began to climb.There was lots of splinters stiking out of the chair with really sharp tips.Wen i reached the top in the distance i could a giant object moving closer and closer then i reilised it was a giant.
ReplyDeleteOooo Brookburn - these are great stories! I love the way you have added the challenge words in too. I think the transformer idea is super and you all added lovely droplets of suspense.
ReplyDeletelast satuday we had fun with u.
ReplyDeleteI like Lewis and Ellie s themost but there all greatuG
ReplyDeleteFabulous writing!
ReplyDeleteWhat type of words are these?
Mysterious - adjective or verb?
artefact - verb or noun?
hallucinations - noun or adjective?
sniffed - adjective or verb?
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