Below is a sentence that must be somewhere in your writing plus another 100 words. Use the photo to help your creative ideas.
This weeks prompt: ‘As I was in the air, my heart pounded.’
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Remember this is a creative piece of writing. You MUST use the prompt as it is but it can be anywhere in your writing.
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As I skidded of the mountain I felt the air bashing against my body. Another thing I did was an amazing 180 bunny tail whip. I also did a sick front flip. As I flew in the air I sang my very own song Flying in the air. I also saw something medium sized in front of me, but what was it?
ReplyDeleteAs I drifted past every tree in sight a bit of wind made my eyes water. A small amount of snow hit me in my pale face it felt like it had been stung by a giant hornet. I saw a giant cloud that looked like a rabbit flying. It had 2 ear like peninsulas, a square shape snout and another 2 peninsulas that looked like legs.
ReplyDeleteJack, I love the way you enjoy trying out new juicy vocabulary. Well done!
ReplyDeleteFinishing off with a question Kaif was inspired - great cliff hanger.