While I navigated myself across the bridge I noticed a shark as big as a whale. When I saw the shark my heart started to pound as fast as a cheetah. Later on I heard a baby screaming in a high pitch voice. Sometimes I could feel that something was following me, but what was it? As I walked down the haunted path, I fell into a hole. Later I woke up and found out that I was ALIVE! But where was I?
As I was glaring at the huge smoky, dark but also scary high mountain. A gigantic pathway appeared right below my feet, everything in my body began to shake! I was wondering whether to take my first step against the smoky black tiled path. But no I dared to take on my fears and started to travel among the nerve racking path. As I was at the half way point the path automatically disappeared, although I was still standing tall. A few weeks later I was about 2 metres away from reaching my destination when suddenly a immense monster a-rose above from the smoky clouds. I began to scream, until I woke up and realized It was all a night-mare!
The misty path could lead you anywhere but where?As soon as possible the path freaked me out of my shoes and they was not only one single path there were 4 more paths.The fog was controlling the path as I glared at the gargantuan cave at the end of the path, it looked far from the start of the amazing path but if you go in it you get the fright of your life!I was running away from home until I came to a dead end.I ran back but I saw a astonishingly big path.I was so cautioustly scared As time went by the howling wind crashed against my cheeks.
When I lost my navigator I got scared my home was miles a way the only thing that was saving me from vanishing for life was a tiny bridge that lay under my feet .I was desperate to go home but it was miles away .Suddenly I herd a voice amazingly, I was not scared but then the bridge started to split apart just like ice and then I saw a shadow it came closer and closer it was my sister. If it was my sister then my home cant be far away I was touched softly by some thing. What was it ? What did it want? Why me ?
Softly, the clouds move and they make you want to jump on them and sleep with them through the night. The path makes you feel like theres something or someone behind you. It also looks like its going to brake when you stand on it. The hard, gravely mountain top looks like it about to erupt any minute with the hard rock and gravel. Cautiously, the hard rock mountain top trys pushing through the clouds.Some of the clouds make it hard for the mountain top the push through. The sky make the mountain top look very spooky. When you look at it and it sends shivers down you spine if you see something like a black bird soring through the sky.
As time went by the unusually strange path moved left to right gently. Before the outstandingly mysterious path brought an very very shaky mountain to life, it would sometimes drag you into a murderous world of mystery!Even though people sometimes go to the path and get very very injured by moving up down left and right. Sometimes I would wake up screaming about the mysterious path but I would know its a dream.
Skerey like a gost thatas fisd a wey for ever. Waydly the clouds wizz arond.At the end of the cosway there is a under grond forist at the end of the cousway. In the mist
Cautiously the explors wondered around the dark misty place wondering what was the strange world they had entered.As the lost explors walked on the path the thin mist grew thick until they couldn't even see their hands!Although they had been walk for hours they were nowhere near the end of the path,when is this madness going to end!?While the poor explors as walking down the endless path they stared to hear a murderous coming from nowhere , they was desperately running for there lives,what were they going to do?!
It has a little black island at the end there are white and grey clouds there are also a long path with white it has white dots between I want to go there because I would love to watch the mouton's suddenly it was dark it has crack between the paths ?
AS I walked towards the mountain kilimanjaro all the blue sky in sight turned grey and my ankles got surrounded by clouds. I was going to have to get to it it was my only option of getting down to flat ground again.
As I was walking desperately down the path there was wind blowing softly at my face the wind got even wilder as i was getting closer to the island. When I got about two inch away from the island they was a storm and the storm blow me away from the island so I did not even see the island I waked up in my bed so it was a dream few.
The bridged of the gods and myths and historical animals have been walked over countless times from the sky to the mountain that nobody has ever seen but if they did. They would be disappointed because they have been climbing the 2ed vastest mountain in the world. When the gods come to Earth the gods create the weather on this pointless planet.
Ones a born an tame there was a boy called James how wanted to cross the path. There was clards what looked softly, james jumped on the clards they was lake a baize castle. James started walking a cross the path when James warked he was going round in sorrels the path was mothing sauuded to sarued James nelly fell from the sky after 6 hrs later James faliy got there james droped on to the fall JamesJames sore a skeleton it was my frenid.
I walked with slow footsteps across a thin bridge with no handrail - just straight scary spooky lines in the cracks. I did not now want I was doing I said to my self want am I doing I screed! I Could not see haw far nuder neth the bridge went with all the fog on top the fog is thick like a big pillow but it was bract wait it gos for mails and mails but just in the centre a ids in the dist I walked to OS it all I could see rock but I card on going when I got there it start to rain and fuder and laynt it made a hec of a noss but I was not igtin it I trayd to stad on the grawd with the by bratin awww! I slipt on the ice want av I do? I said ooooonnnnn haw do I get out off her help !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! me!!!!!!!!!!!!.
There are little black stones with deep dark cracks in them. At the bottom other the path there was a mount en. They are deep dark ranny clouds and wight clouds
When I was walking I saw a boy he was really young ask what's your name is Tom! Cool good. Mints later I felt sleepy soon I got home and went to sleep in my bed. later I ran to my friends House he was awake I told him we going to the foist we was walking SUDDENTLY Tom fell in a deep hole he didn't know where he was he was in a path to this mounties tops he saw some gold he took it home he was the rich kid in the world people were choked and happily.
long ago they was a man could Tom. And his friend could Max. They were walking then they ran fast. Suddenly they fell in a big hole. Then when they got up there was a path and at the end they was lots of mud and a spade. Next tom dear Max to go and look under the mud and see what was there. Saw he went but the path was really dark wildly he slip and fell in the smoke tom was the only one to find his way home. But he looked back and sore a hand saw he picked it up and went home.
There it was the path to the forbidden mountain I could not balive my eyes. Softly we walked across the path wondering if we should turn back,we knew something was going to happen. Desperately we ran forward hoping we could get of the path but it was like a dream it was going on and on and on!wildly the wind started to swish about it nearly blew one of the explorers of of the edge, it was scary. suddenly the path came to an end , we had reached are destination. We had got what we came for! hooray!
Just amazing 100 word challenges Y5. You're really getting into the shoes of a writer. I like the way you not only use your targets but get into a fabulous entertaining style as well... JUST what we're looking for!
While I navigated myself across the bridge I noticed a shark as big as a whale. When I saw the shark my heart started to pound as fast as a cheetah. Later on I heard a baby screaming in a high pitch voice. Sometimes I could feel that something was following me, but what was it? As I walked down the haunted path, I fell into a hole. Later I woke up and found out that I was ALIVE! But where was I?
ReplyDeleteAs I was glaring at the huge smoky, dark but also scary high mountain. A gigantic pathway appeared right below my feet, everything in my body began to shake! I was wondering whether to take my first step against the smoky black tiled path. But no I dared to take on my fears and started to travel among the nerve racking path. As I was at the half way point the path automatically disappeared, although I was still standing tall. A few weeks later I was about 2 metres away from reaching my destination when suddenly a immense monster a-rose above from the smoky clouds. I began to scream, until I woke up and realized It was all a night-mare!
ReplyDeleteThe misty path could lead you anywhere but where?As soon as possible the path freaked me out of my shoes and they was not only one single path there were 4 more paths.The fog was controlling the path as I glared at the gargantuan cave at the end of the path, it looked far from the start of the amazing path but if you go in it you get the fright of your life!I was running away from home until I came to a dead end.I ran back but I saw a astonishingly big path.I was so cautioustly scared As time went by the howling wind crashed against my cheeks.
ReplyDeleteWhen I lost my navigator I got scared my home was miles a way the only thing that was saving me from vanishing for life was a tiny bridge that lay under my feet .I was desperate to go home but it was miles away .Suddenly I herd a voice amazingly, I was not scared but then the bridge started to split apart just like ice and then I saw a shadow it came closer and closer it was my sister. If it was my sister then my home cant be far away I was touched softly by some thing. What was it ? What did it want? Why me ?
ReplyDeleteSoftly, the clouds move and they make you want to jump on them and sleep with them through the night.
ReplyDeleteThe path makes you feel like theres something or someone behind you. It also looks like its going to brake when you stand on it.
The hard, gravely mountain top looks like it about to erupt any minute with the hard rock and gravel.
Cautiously, the hard rock mountain top trys pushing through the clouds.Some of the clouds make it hard for the mountain top the push through.
The sky make the mountain top look very spooky. When you look at it and it sends shivers down you spine if you see something like a black bird soring through the sky.
As time went by the unusually strange path moved left to right gently. Before the outstandingly mysterious path brought an very very shaky mountain to life, it would sometimes drag you into a murderous world of mystery!Even though people sometimes go to the path and get very very injured by moving up down left and right. Sometimes I would wake up screaming about the mysterious path but I would know its a dream.
ReplyDeleteSkerey like a gost thatas fisd a wey for ever. Waydly the clouds wizz arond.At the end of the cosway there is a under grond forist at the end of the cousway. In the mist
ReplyDeleteCautiously the explors wondered around the dark misty place wondering what was the strange world they had entered.As the lost explors walked on the path the thin mist grew thick until they couldn't even see their hands!Although they had been walk for hours they were nowhere near the end of the path,when is this madness going to end!?While the poor explors as walking down the endless path they stared to hear a murderous coming from nowhere , they was desperately running for there lives,what were they going to do?!
ReplyDeleteIt has a little black island at the end there are white and grey clouds there are also a long path with white it has white dots between I want to go there because I would love to watch the mouton's suddenly it was dark it has crack between the paths ?
ReplyDeleteAS I walked towards the mountain kilimanjaro all the blue sky in sight turned grey and my ankles got surrounded by clouds. I was going to have to get to it it was my only option of getting down to flat ground again.
ReplyDeleteAs I was walking desperately down the path there was wind blowing softly at my face the wind got even wilder as i was getting closer to the island. When I got about two inch away from the island they was a storm and the storm blow me away from the island so I did not even see the island I waked up in my bed so it was a dream few.
ReplyDeleteThe bridged of the gods and myths and historical animals have been walked over countless times from the sky to the mountain that nobody has ever seen but if they did. They would be disappointed because they have been climbing the 2ed vastest mountain in the world. When the gods come to Earth the gods create the weather on this pointless planet.
ReplyDeleteOnes a born an tame there was a boy called James how wanted to cross the path. There was clards what looked softly, james jumped on the clards they was lake a baize castle. James started walking a cross the path when James warked he was going round in sorrels the path was mothing sauuded to sarued James nelly fell from the sky after 6 hrs later James faliy got there james droped on to the fall JamesJames sore a skeleton it was my frenid.
ReplyDeleteI walked with slow footsteps across a thin bridge with no handrail - just straight scary spooky lines in the cracks. I did not now want I was doing I said to my self want am I doing I screed! I Could not see haw far nuder neth the bridge went with all the fog on top the fog is thick like a big pillow
ReplyDeletebut it was bract wait it gos for mails and mails but just in the centre a ids in the dist I walked to OS it all I could see rock but I card on going when I got there it start to rain and fuder and laynt it made a hec of a noss but I was not igtin it I trayd to stad on the grawd with the by bratin awww! I slipt on
the ice want av I do? I said ooooonnnnn haw do I get out off her help !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! me!!!!!!!!!!!!.
There are little black stones with deep dark cracks in them. At the bottom other the path there was a mount en. They are deep dark ranny clouds and wight clouds
ReplyDeleteIt's misty and super foggy with a misty path "it's from spooks-ville! I tell you!" the misty fog is so black you will not see anything in it.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was walking I saw a boy he was really young ask what's your name is Tom! Cool good.
ReplyDeleteMints later I felt sleepy soon I got home and went to sleep in my bed.
later I ran to my friends House he was awake I told him we going to the foist we was walking SUDDENTLY Tom fell in a deep hole he didn't know where he was he was in a path to this mounties tops he saw some gold he took it home
he was the rich kid in the world people were choked and happily.
long ago they was a man could Tom. And his friend could Max. They were walking then they ran fast. Suddenly they fell in a big hole. Then when they got up there was a path and at the end they was lots of mud and a spade. Next tom dear Max to go and look under the mud and see what was there. Saw he went but the path was really dark wildly he slip and fell in the smoke tom was the only one to find his way home. But he looked back and sore a hand saw he picked it up and went home.
ReplyDeleteThere it was the path to the forbidden mountain I could not balive my eyes. Softly we walked across the path wondering if we should turn back,we knew something was going to happen. Desperately we ran forward hoping we could get of the path but it was like a dream it was going on and on and on!wildly the wind started to swish about it nearly blew one of the explorers of of the edge, it was scary. suddenly the path came to an end , we had reached are destination. We had got what we came for! hooray!
ReplyDeleteJust amazing 100 word challenges Y5. You're really getting into the shoes of a writer. I like the way you not only use your targets but get into a fabulous entertaining style as well... JUST what we're looking for!
ReplyDeletekaif i like that you have used alot of qustions and that you had said what you had felt as well.
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